Conseils et Recommandations

Question n°1
: On vous demande "a topic sentence" c'est à dire une phrase clé (qui doit être courte) et qui exprime l'idée générale.
Question n°2 : Encore un exercice de ponctuation classique sans difficulté aucune!
Question n°3 : Il s'agit de produire une phrase cohérente à partir des mots donnés tout en ajoutant d'autre mots.
Question n°4 : On vous demande de répondre à une lettre.
- D'abord, lisez bien la lettre initiale rédigée par Selma Mahmoud et envoyée à Amin.
- Par la suite, réunissez vos idées et organisez-les.
- Enfin, n'oubliez pas que vous allez fournir des conseils. N'omettez donc pas d'utiliser les "modals" suivants: You should .../You ought to ... et les expressions suivantes: If I were you, I ... 

 

Corrigé
 1. Add a suitable topic sentence to the following paragraph ( 1 pt )  

Women are lucky / women are luckier than men / women are more privileged than men / women are in a better position than men etc… 
They get long periods off work to have babies . They retire earlier than men and usually live longer than them. 

2. Capitalize and punctuate using commas and periods where necessary : ( 3 pts )  ( Do not rewrite the text ).

    Gary Levis, 33, was repairing his car in Denver Colorado, when the jack collapsed on him. The only witnesses were the children playing nearby.  

3. Make a coherent sentence, using the following words . Add other words when necessary ( 2 pts ) .

A bank  robber / sentenced / ten  and a half years / yesterday / after / identified / his car plate .  
Yesterday, a bank robber was sentenced to ten and a half years after he had been / having been / being identified by his car plate.

4. Selma Mahmoud wrote the following letter to Amin , a newspaper columnist , to seek advice . Read the letter and write in about 10  lines Amin’s reply to help Selma . (Do not write your name) (8 points).

       

     Dear Amin , 

 

                 My father died 3 years ago and since then my mother has worked hard to support us both. I am about to start my first year at the university . My mother wants me to go to university and to become a teacher , but I think I must start earning a living so that my aging mother can stop working and enjoy life. What should I do?  

 

                                                                                                             Selma Mahmoud 

  

            Dear Amin , 

Adherence to content  1 point
Flow of speech 2 points
Language (Grammar and vocabulary) 3 points
Coherence     1 point 
Spelling and punctuation   1 point

                                                                                                                                                               Amin